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PLANNED CHANGES

when I start writing my script I will make sure to add commas to break up the text and to also not give Emily as much dialogue as she already has. Ben also mentioned to shorten and get rid a lot of the unessacery camera shots that I have included in my script. I could also give some of the secondary characters more backstory and an insight into what characters are like and what their traits could be. 

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